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samuraiprosecutor ([personal profile] samuraiprosecutor) wrote2008-02-21 07:44 am

[OOC: Stupid in Love - A Concrit Post of a Different Sort]

Okay, I know this is going to come as a HUGE surprise to some of you, but in the future there will be Phoenix/Edgeworth lovin'.

"NO WAI!" I can hear some of you cry, and I must reply, "WAI. So very wai." Their relationship is progressing (possibly faster than we anticipated, if the Secrets Posts have anything to say about it) and we were kind of curious how well it's working so far. We're trying our damnedest to make it IC as possible and also as realistic as we can make it. These two are somewhat emotionally retarded and utterly stupid over one another, but we want it to stay within reason. XD

So that's where this post comes in. Give us your constructive criticism, PLEASE. Are we moving too fast? Too slow? Do they sound like teenagers in love, or 20-something lawyers with major issues and really hot legs? Are you all screaming for them to just get a room and screw each other silly, for fuck's sake? How well (or poorly XD) are we handling their relationship?

Keep in mind that at this moment in time, they still don't believe what they have is anything different from a deep (really, REALLY deep) friendship. Despite appearances. XD

[identity profile] tourmalinefey.livejournal.com 2008-02-21 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, I've probably mentioned to you before, but I loveloveLOVE how carefully you guys are planning this out. It's going really naturally and brilliantly right now, and fantastically IC. I love watching them interact, and the subtle ways it's changing.

I am rather proud of myself for guessing several of the secrets as theirs. and then wibbling madly at the comments.

My inner fangirl might be shouting GET A ROOM etc etc, but you can ignore her. XD

~Miri
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[personal profile] attorneyatlol 2008-02-21 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
lol relationship concrit wtf



...what hiatus.

[identity profile] cakeordeathnote.livejournal.com 2008-02-21 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Aheheh, considering that I know precious little about the finer details of the series, I don't know how accurate anything I have to say might be, but from a writing standpoint it looks good! They're adults who've settled into their sense of self, and it comes across. Their interactions are well-paced and complex, and it's very realistic: they start off talking business, sure, but once the professionalism runs its course, things get uncomfortable. Moments of strained silence and flickers of underlying elements say much, much more than, well...anything! What's there to worry about? XD


ALTHOUGH I MAY BE DOING TOO MUCH THINKING ON NOT ENOUGH SLEEP.

[identity profile] re-formed.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
I second this opinion!

And I've had a nap, so I've got enough sleep!

[identity profile] manga-ghost.livejournal.com 2008-02-21 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, Pearl-mun here!

Personally, (and since I've only just come into this wonderful little plot maybe I can see it objectively...?) looking back on all the posts and stuff, I think you're both handling it wonderfully and carefully and really ICly. Seriously, I can't see any problems here. ♥ I read your posts and end up with a silly little grin on my face.

That being said, during the epic ANON!thread those two had on the secrets, I was both rofling and headesking in equal measures. Seriously, if Pearls wasn't such a die-hard Nick/Maya shipper, she'd be banging their heads together by now. XD

Ahem. Anyway, nothing to worry about is what I'm saying. ^^;

[identity profile] sine-sole-sileo.livejournal.com 2008-02-21 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you guys are doing a great job. I haven't played PW, and all I know of the characters is from DDD, but I think you're progressing just fine. :)

[identity profile] sine-sole-sileo.livejournal.com 2008-02-29 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
:D! Maybe someday I'll get a DS (Right? God, I'm technologically retarded) and play PW, but for now, I'll enjoy you guys here. XD

It's all good, dude! I'm a complete music nerd (comes in handy with Apollo), so half the time, I'm listening to movie soundtracks and Classical albums. You know what? Here, take this (http://download.yousendit.com/624AFCE30E0BF262) and this (http://download.yousendit.com/C29D7BFF42953E98). They're the two discs for the soundtrack for Amadeus, the best fucking movie ever. XD

And no, you haven't! Thank you! Brandon Boyd is absolutely gorgeous. ♥

[identity profile] sine-sole-sileo.livejournal.com 2008-03-02 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
That is so cool! I was trying to convince my dad to get me and my mom one for Christmas - I really want the new Zelda game, and my mom wants Brain Age. I think there's a lot of games that can really benefit you! I'm glad they're making educational games now, so that people can do them in their free time or whenever. :B

;o; I-I will!!

Dude, tell me about it. I'm to the point of movie soundtracks either making or breaking movies for me, it's almost a obsession. XD! Haha, Edgeworth is a Classical kind of fellow, and you're welcome! I love sharing music! No dude, don't worry about it, I've been crap at replying to IC comments for like four days now, haha. XD

Same here! ♥